Descriptive:
Aniket Patel bowls the ball to Danish Hussain, he hits it and it flies over the fence. "A six he shouted," and his whole team came by to congratulate him putting their hands up for high-fives. Everyday, Cricket is played at lunch on the tennis courts. Many freshmen and sophomores come out and play usually and sometimes even juniors and seniors come out. Many people try out their batting skills, while others start to learn the correct way and practice on bowling.
Compare/Contrast:
Two weeks ago when Cricket Club was first starting off, only Freshmen came out to play. As anouncements came on about the club and when the club got their own bulletin board, many people came out to learn about the club and play the sport.
Startling Statement:
Cricket Club on a tennis court?
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ReplyDeleteI like the third one....the first is good but grammar makes it a little hard to keep up with....
ReplyDelete~Akshara
My favorite by far was the last one. The first one includes the nutgraph, and the second one is only relevant now. The final one can be used on many levels at different times.
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